Artemis wrote:IT IS HORRIBLE......It realy does the costume isnt right the jokes are to cheesy the stroy is repetitive...Ugh i hate it
Artemis wrote:You know the reason i removed that from my siggy was because i figured out it was horrible
Proof its bad...this is all i got done anyway
Prologue "No! I wont let you go!" Yelled Ellen. "Brat….I dont give a crap." Uttered Prometheus. "Fine dangit,just leave me here to die!!" Ellen Cried. Prometheus just walked away without a word.
Chapter 1 "Hey kid" Yelled an older man of about 40. "What the hell do you want" Screamed the young Prometheus. "Your new in town ain't ya?"said the man. "Yeah" Prometheus said. "Yah didnt get your welcome beating" Yelled the man while running at him. The man fought hard,but sloppy.Prometheus Gave him a cuff to the jaw cracking it and then elbow slammed his shoulder,dislocatng the mans arm.
The man lay on the groung moaning, while prometheus contenuid on his way. While Prometheus was walking through town he saw a lot of hungry children, he wished he could do something to help.
daredevil96 wrote:The show is nothing like the Ultimate Spider-man comics. They got Wolverine's costume wrong, it should be the ultimate version!
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